Describe a real moment in your life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story. Tell what happened, and why it felt like a turning point in your life?

 

    A powerful moment of my life is when I was on stage for a hard concert. Many of the songs and section I have only played once, and so never, so I spent a good time sight reading. While others I have played many times before. Yet on stage I played notes smoothly and quickly. It felt freeing being on that stage playing, it was the first time I felt so much emotion towards playing on stage. After that I knew why I loved music so much.


We took notes, and wrote a bit of a rhetoric analyst.


I learned how to write an rhetoric.

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